Monday, July 23, 2007

Haiku - comfort

hard ground becomes
muddy transformation
as rain seeps

slow drip relief
soothes weary limbs
midsummer rain

gently swayed
in the birdhouse
wind gust lullaby

© Strauss
23rd July 2007

63 comments:

Clare said...

I love the nature images in all these haiku -- and the wonderful feeling they evoke. I also love the whole idea of transformation. Well-done and very beautiful!
:)

Roswila said...

I love the feeling of that last one... wind gust lullaby ... yes.

Crafty Green Poet said...

I love your third haiku, beautiful.

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

The third is fascinating, but they all evoke feeling.

Regina Clare Jane said...

Oh, strauss, these were just lovely. I liked the gusty lulluaby as well! :)

Rae Trigg said...

Beautiful. I especially liked the third haiku, but they all painted lovely pictures.

jem said...

The last one is beautiful, and its nice to think of comfort being offered to other creatures as well as us.

tumblewords said...

Very nice transitionals. Lovely!

Mandy said...

the middle one is my favourite, though they're all good

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Hi, I'm back...finally. Sorry it's been so long. Work has been a problem so I am taking a haitus. This was a really interesting post. From where i am at this is just awesome because it's about rain. So dry here. I like the third one the best as well.

I hope you will come back and see what I have done with my blog. I am writing poetry again, although I'm a bit rusty.

Biotress said...

I just wanted to let you know I enjoyed reading over your poems...great stuff!

susan said...

Particularly like the lsast one. Thanks for the read.

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Cynthia said...

this poem vivdly paints the transformations nature brings about.

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your words are so visual!
its very difficult to find a good haiku, but yours is surely one of then.
keep writing budz!

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