tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-939190998832729394.post6780214440179969503..comments2023-10-22T01:41:53.910-07:00Comments on burnt offerings: The Unsuppressablestrausshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10277562911746970978noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-939190998832729394.post-32217242803606717832007-03-25T18:55:00.000-07:002007-03-25T18:55:00.000-07:00Love the second to last stanza. It brings to mind ...Love the second to last stanza. It brings to mind the image of someone destroying themselves from within.writerwomanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-939190998832729394.post-67431773141587672542007-03-22T10:06:00.000-07:002007-03-22T10:06:00.000-07:00Ohhhh. I hope this is fiction! Very moving.Ohhhh. I hope this is fiction! Very moving.Normahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11502895616873273470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-939190998832729394.post-38413520945673616282007-02-22T09:28:00.000-08:002007-02-22T09:28:00.000-08:00Great ending! And I really like how you were able...Great ending! And I really like how you were able to weave the phrase the body knows throughout the poem. Well done.Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08058447022953846355noreply@blogger.com