Friday, June 22, 2007

Haiku - on a windy day

whispering sisters
share secrets in the breeze
poplars sway
© Strauss
22 June 2007

4 comments:

Mandy said...

knockout

love it tremendously

Crafty Green Poet said...

did I not comment on this one last week? It's great!

annie said...

i love haiku. haven't written any in a while, just started after coming across the haiku, senryu and tanka of other blogging poets. thanks for the inspiration.

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